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Post by FunnyFroggy on Nov 13, 2008 20:52:51 GMT -5
Cuz you lub me. ROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
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Post by Blackboy0 on Dec 17, 2008 22:05:39 GMT -5
Starting was really awesome, but after that, loads of room for improvement... the pacing was way too fast, and the presentation of the super hero part was a little (No offense intended) cliche Awesome concept, just need to work on your presentation and then you'll have a masterpiece ^^ If you want a full blown constructive criticism review sentence for sentence analysis thingy thing I'm not the person you should turn to, though, cuz I suck ^^"" (I feel like an ego freak ahh) Awesum bike Keep writing!! Haha, thanks for that I'm sort of only writing this because my mind is exploding with ideas, and I'm going insane. Yes, once in 708 years I'm going insane, it happens Well... I have NO idea when Chapter 2 is coming, but it MIGHT come. I have no idea really... Thanks for the comments, and Reve & Froggy, go spam another Topic
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Post by FunnyFroggy on Dec 18, 2008 0:20:43 GMT -5
I thought we had something in common! >O
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Post by dest1 on Dec 18, 2008 0:28:43 GMT -5
Starting was really awesome, but after that, loads of room for improvement... the pacing was way too fast, and the presentation of the super hero part was a little (No offense intended) cliche Awesome concept, just need to work on your presentation and then you'll have a masterpiece ^^ If you want a full blown constructive criticism review sentence for sentence analysis thingy thing I'm not the person you should turn to, though, cuz I suck ^^"" (I feel like an ego freak ahh) Awesum bike Keep writing!! Haha, thanks for that I'm sort of only writing this because my mind is exploding with ideas, and I'm going insane. Yes, once in 708 years I'm going insane, it happens Well... I have NO idea when Chapter 2 is coming, but it MIGHT come. I have no idea really... Thanks for the comments, and Reve & Froggy, go spam another Topic That's what I say when I make a super cool blog/story.
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Reve
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Post by Reve on Dec 18, 2008 8:02:55 GMT -5
But you're the Chosen One.
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Post by Blackboy0 on Dec 23, 2008 16:02:04 GMT -5
I know I'm the Chosen One, and the Chosen One commands the Little Two to spam another topic
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