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Sept 3, 2008 20:37:46 GMT -5
Post by souseiki on Sept 3, 2008 20:37:46 GMT -5
Lets put some music on, kay people? Listen to it while you read please www.youtube.com/watch?v=_0B1rWg_ti4&feature=PlayList&p=E14B9292A2F690C2&index=4----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- EclipseChapter 1-Introductions A cloaked man appeared on the sphere, moving so fast as if he was half gone and half visible. He wore a pirate’s bandana and a Xeraphim on his right hand. He was a developing infighter, one of the lost breed among the maplers. He stopped, not even panting, and looked right at the sphere. His aura shone white for a split second and the air seemed to shimmer for awhile. He turned, disappeared, and the sphere blackened only to show a different scene. This time it showed a young woman, fleeing from a village filled with smoke. The girl was streaming tears and her clothes showed burning marks of her recent encounters. She wore hunter’s clothes and a quiver full of arrows on her back. Her bow was ready and strung as she entered into the rogue forests of ellinia. Her aura gleamed red, and once again, the air twisted and the vision of her on the sphere was gone. A young boy appeared on the sphere. He met with his opponent with a clash of blades and quickly executed a perfect savage blow in a second with his deadly fin. His opponent crashed into the ground, his weapon also falling. The broken body erupted into flame a moment later, and it disappeared. The boy brushed off the blood from his blade and prepared for the next attack. His aura blazed blue, and the connection was once again broken. The sphere cracked, and split into a thousand pieces. The sorcerer sighed and watched as the door to the room creaked open. The Captain came in. He wielded a Pinaka and the best armor that you could find. “These are your chosen, sir. The ones from the prophecy, as you wished.” “Your job is now finished. Tell no one or you shall find yourself engulfed in flame as hot as hell itself.” The sorcerer quickly bowed his head and rushed out of the room, relieved that what he believed was the worse was over. The Captain muttered something under his breath and he disappeared in a flash of light.
The boy blocked the incoming attack with his wristguard while he side-kicked his opponent, sending him flying towards the nearest wall. The boy was one of the most wanted in all of Victoria Island, his capture reward was 1 billion mesos. His name was Adrian, a talented young man born with the art of daggers and bandits. But…his father’s mistake sent the kingdom on the brink of despair. Adrian closed his eyes and exploded his aura, making every living human around him freeze to death from his ice spell. He opened his eyes, hasted himself, and ran into the night. As he ran he felt a strange presence, as if it was someone of great importance yet a friend. Find Me. He slowed down, using all of his senses to find and hear the voice again. A bright light illuminated from a couple of trees in front of him. Come to me. Adrian braced himself and walked forward into the clearing. When his eyes adjusted, he saw was the goddess Minerva herself. I just spent like, 1 hr doing this so you better like it! i was gonna include Lyte and Lyza too but i got lazy..
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Sept 3, 2008 22:03:58 GMT -5
Post by wsxedcr08 on Sept 3, 2008 22:03:58 GMT -5
Awesome! And you did include Lyte he's first in the sorcerer's spell. Unless you wrote that before you edited. =P
Can't wait to see what's next. =D
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Sept 4, 2008 0:11:39 GMT -5
Post by guosim on Sept 4, 2008 0:11:39 GMT -5
Wooo~ Didn't read a fanfic in some time! Go go go!
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Sept 17, 2008 23:26:02 GMT -5
Post by souseiki on Sept 17, 2008 23:26:02 GMT -5
Another music thing! Listen pl0x www.youtube.com/watch?v=skqUOfEahFM&feature=PlayList&p=E14B9292A2F690C2&index=0----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2 – Velocity
The cloaked man awoke from his nap against a tree. He lifted a small chain from his neck and a small pendant appeared at the end of it. He looked at it, and closed his eyes while the pendant disappeared. Wait for me, Lyza…I’ll find you, I promise. Just wait for me. The man slowly got up and stretched his arms and legs. He then ran on, in direction to Ellinia.
>((-Begin flashback-))<
“Hurry up Lyte! We’ll miss lunch if you doddle!” Lyza called to her brother while she waited for him at the end of the field. “ Jeez…lighten up Lyza. Its not like we’re gonna be late or anything” Said Lyte as he finally caught up to his sister. She sighed and muttered something about being too laid back and never being serious and started walking again. Meanwhile, Lyte secretly pulled out a claw-like thing and put it on his arm. He sneaked up on his sister and grabbed her hand while he started to run. They disappeared and a few miles away, at the entrance of a town, they reappeared again. Lyte was panting and Lyza was looking at him, surprise written all over her face. “H-How did you do that? And what is THAT?” She pointed at Lyte’s claw-like thing and stared at him. (f6) Lyte smiled brightly and replied “ I thought it would make us get here faster..I mean, saves us the time right? And This ‘thing’ is a Xeraphim. It lets me travel super fast even though it takes up a lot of my energy.” He took it off, shrunk it, and put it into his pocket. He then started talking to the town “Come on! You’re the one that said to walk faster! Or do you wanna do something else now?” Lyza caught up to her brother, “Of course not! Come on, lets go. Or else they might yell at us again.” She ran on ahead to one of the houses and went in. “Always in a hurry…” Lyte sighed and followed. A few minutes later, they found themselves sitting down with a feast of fruit and meet on the dinner table. Their parents, who had prepared the meal, sat down on the other end of it. “So, Lyza, Lyte is going to go to a pirate job school in another continent. He’s leaving early tomorrow morning for the boat.” The father said, after he swallowed a morsel of food. “I know…” “You’re going to stay with us. Your mother will teach you the basics of the bowman and you will stay here until you reach a higher level of skill.” Lyte, however, remained silent through the whole evening and after he finished, left immediately and went straight to his room. Lyza followed him and found him packing his bags. She went past his room and into her own and picked up a chain. ‘I almost completed the present. Just a little bit more…’ Lyza concentrated her aura and the room glowed bright red. The chain absorbed the aura and after a few seconds, it also started glowing red. Lyza picked up the chain and a small pendant appeared on the end of it. ‘Done. I’ll give it to him tomorrow, just before he leaves. I’ll sure miss him…’ She put it in a box on her windowsill and she slept, exhausted from the aura transfer.
Lyte pulled out a feather from his pocket and held it out before him. It was white and he held out his other hand. He concentrated his aura into his palm and his hand became slightly white. He then transferred his aura to the feather and it also glowed white. When he finished, he put it on his bed and looked at it. ‘My gift…I hope Lyza likes it. I wonder if she remembered.’ He carefully put it in a box, identical to Lyza’s. He then continued packing.
The next morning Lyte stood in front of the house, saying good-bye to the neighbors and his parents. Lyte eventually managed to get out of the mob of people and walked up to Lyza. He held out the box with the feather in it and said “Here. I finished mine. Did you finish yours?” Lyza took the box and gave him hers. “Of course I did! Come back, okay? This place’ll be so gloomy without you…” They hugged each other and said their good-byes. Lyte walked to the direction of Ellinia, where the boats were.
~~<{{-End Flashback-}}>~~----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- you guys can expect one every two weeks..or something like that. Here. the next one. All about Lyte =P Next will be... Chapter 3 - White Flame
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Sept 18, 2008 10:55:07 GMT -5
Post by wsxedcr08 on Sept 18, 2008 10:55:07 GMT -5
This is amazing! You're a great writer keep it up.
(And yay Lyte! =D)
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Sept 24, 2008 22:41:49 GMT -5
Post by souseiki on Sept 24, 2008 22:41:49 GMT -5
Here..music time! www.youtube.com/watch?v=reb3C2wpJLQ Chapter 3 – White Flame
Narrator: Some believe that Lucifer was the one the one that covered the earth unto eternal darkness, while others just believe that it was a unfortunate incident. Rather, it was simply a misunderstanding. Worship, destruction, confusion, peace…that is all that such a thing brought down to the mapling world.
Lyza collapsed in the shade of an oak tree. She turned around so she was lying on her back. She slowly took out a box, opened it, and took out the white feather that her brother had given her. She closed her eyes and memories once again stormed into her head, of her family all together, when they were little, the day that Lyte had left…and finally the vivid picture of her burning village in her head. Lyte…I wish you were here. Maybe then I wouldn’t have accidently done it and caused such destruction. Lyza sighed. I know you’ll be back though…that’s all that matters. She put the feather back into the box and then into her pocket. She got up and stretched her tired limbs. Suddenly, she felt a sharp sting of pain on her neck, and the world went black. She felt herself crumple on the floor and an arm of a stranger carry her away before she went totally unconscious. Lyza woke up, in a bed covered with expensive linen sheets. She got up to a sitting position and then she looked all around her. A man wearing high ranking warrior armor with a dragon’s gate sheathed was sitting next to her, a guard probably. He looked at her for a second and then went out of the room, bringing his weapon with him. A few moments later, the guard came back into the room, he beckoned her to follow him out and in a moment, Lyza found herself walking out in a well lit hall. Neither of them talked to each other while they walked. Lyza was still trying to figure out what happened and why she was even there when they came up to a big, well decorated door. The guard put his palm up to the door and his aura entered into one of the decorations. The door immediately opened and the pair walked into a large room. There were paintings on the walls, two rows of people from all four classes lined up on the four walls. Captain sat at the feet of a pillar, where he overlooked everything. The guard pushed Lyza into the room and then the door slammed shut. Two of the people came up to her and escorted her up to Captain. “Who are you? Why am I here? Who are all these people? Where am I?” “I am Captain, the leader of the organization, Surge.” He walked up to her and he looked at her neck. There was a glowing triangle with a symbol of flame. The next moment, Lyza was back in her room with only a vague memory of what had actually happened in the room. All she knew was that she wanted to stay in the place on which she was in… Captain once again seated himself in the chair. He grinned at himself what he had just done. I have one hybrid…two more to find for myself and everything will be mine! You’ll pay for what you did to me, Ranger. Captain walked up to the wall at the back of the room and slipped a silver cord into one of the openings in one of the bricks. The wall groaned and moved away to reveal a rack of the best job weapons there could be. He took for himself a Timeless Claymore and then, getting used to the weight of the weapon, he disappeared into the night, toward Ranger, Lyte, and Adrian.
Another two weeks to go for another one! Hoped you likedddd next chap i'll post what the chars all look like.
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Sept 27, 2008 16:19:38 GMT -5
Post by wsxedcr08 on Sept 27, 2008 16:19:38 GMT -5
omg wooo! I can't wait for the next one!
Sorry I took a while to read it, internet died and ive been so busy with hw i didn't have a chance to go to the library and check.
-applauds your talent-
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Post by souseiki on Oct 6, 2008 1:52:21 GMT -5
Another song thing! =D www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOQi5bgWYQo Fly-Hillary Duff Chapter 4 – Kanmaru
Adrian gazed wonderingly at the goddess for a moment, and then realized what he was looking at and once again started thinking. He knelt down before her, placing his weapons on the grass. “I-I’m Adrian, at your service.” Minerva smiled a little and gave him a signal to stand. “Good. I’ve come to tell you some things. Sit.” He sat down on the ground while Mineva also settled beside him. “One of them are the Kanmaru.” Adrian’s weapon appeared in her hand. Minerva’s white/yellow aura came together in her hand, which then was absorbed into the deadly fin. There was a flash of white from the dagger and then, after, it turned back to its former form.
“I’ve activated it. A Kanmaru is a source of energy hidden inside every person in forms of mythical or real creatures, such as dragons, phoenixes and the rest. Normally, it lays dormant inside and never awakens until the person dies, where it will come out of the person and then reside in another. But, when I purposely allow my aura to be absorbed by an object, the person that wields the object Kanmaru will awaken and form into the weapon. I only do it for several people, like for instance, Taggrin of Crimsonwood Keep. His Kanmaru was the form of a black wolf. A form of Kanmaru varies in each person, never the same in two people unless one dies.”
Minerva handed Adrian his Dragon’s Tail. “All it takes for the Kanmaru to awaken is for the user to summon his aura while holding the object. Your Kanmaru will come out of yourself and into the weapon. If your object that your Kanmaru resides in is stolen, then a vast amount of your aura and energy will deplete and you will never be yourself again unless you take your enhanced blade back.” Adrian ran his fingers over his weapon. “So, if I summon my aura right now, my Kanmaru will come out?” “..Yes” “What’s the difference if my Kanmaru resides in my Dragon’s Tail?” “Well, your aura will multiply tenfold and your skills sharper than before. You can either choose to fight with your normal form” Minerva pointed at the Dragon’s Tail. “Or with a second, more powerful form. The second form varies depending on the Kanmaru itself. Also, the Kanmaru is as intelligent as any other being in the world, if not more. Never treat it badly or refer to it as a witless, dumb animal. It can do more devastating things than you can ever imagine.” “Would you care to give me an example?” “Well…there were a few incidents where overturned countries, monsters, and others have been recorded.” Adrian shuddered at the idea. “Now, do you want to awaken your Kanmaru?” Adrian took a moment to think and then replied with a yes.
“So, like I said earlier. Summon your aura into your hand that holds the weapon and the rest will be done by itself”, instructed Minerva. Adrian took a deep breath and did as he was told. A blinding pain seemed to engulf him as his Kanmaru came out of him. Adrian felt himself crumble down on the ground and emit a blood curling scream and the next moments seemed to pass by in years. Finally, the transaction ended and Minerva restored him to his former self. While he recovered, the goddess took his Dragon’s tail, which was blindingly blue at the moment, and handed it to him. Adrian uttered wordless thanks and took his weapon. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, a voice that spoke only to him, broke the silence. Hello, young one. I see that you’ve awaken me. The last time that happened was centuries ago…For this time, I will show you my form of your blade. The Dragon’s Tail shimmered silver/blue for a second and when it cleared, dual blades appeared. Blue and gold streaks decorated the hilt while the individual swords themselves were both razor sharp. One of the dual blades was blue while the other was golden. If you shifted the blades you could see a variety of blues and golds on both. Strange, foreign symbols appeared on the sides of both blades. A single silver streak was on the back and front of both swords. Adrian held on in both hands and whipped them around himself for a feel for the swords. He stopped, approval in his eyes. Minerva moved closer to him and translated the symbols… “Rasavi...and Xeneth…” Minerva’s eyes widened and she slowly backed away from Adrian and the swords.
Like it? two more weeks for the next one.
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Oct 6, 2008 16:07:27 GMT -5
Post by Arladerus on Oct 6, 2008 16:07:27 GMT -5
I'm scared. Hilary Duff doesn't look like herself anymore. Too much liposuction.
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Oct 7, 2008 22:58:23 GMT -5
Post by wsxedcr08 on Oct 7, 2008 22:58:23 GMT -5
holy crap that was amazing! Keep it up! =D
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Oct 10, 2008 16:35:28 GMT -5
Post by souseiki on Oct 10, 2008 16:35:28 GMT -5
Okay. Guys, I’m just gonna post some info here just in case I can’t make the story explain it >.< I’ll start with the ‘Hybrids’ thing.
Normally, anyone can be a hybrid, From the richest man to the worst off guy. A normal person usually just has a black triangle on their body, but, the people like Adrian, Lyte, and Lyza have the sign of their elements. Like Lyza is Fire, Lyte is Lightning, and Adrian is Ice. So, to cut to the chase, if anyone happened to ‘do’ something to the signs, they would become a hybrid with a different element. Now, this parts done =P the next part has something about this too. Next would be ‘Kanmaru”.
1. The Kanmaru is what makes a person a hybrid. Without the awakening of the persons’ kanmaru, then they can’t ever truly become a hybrid. See, the chosen are special, so they can become a hybrid of ¾ classes..its different. But a normal person, not chosen by anyone in particular, can only become ½ classes. Of course, you can become a hybrid by training and hard work, but you will only be a master of one. A kanmaru is the thing that completes the other classes. 2. That was the first part, the part with hybrids. This one explains the rest. When a kanmaru is detached from the body, and the object it resides in is also far away from the user, then it will start to fade away from existence. If Adrian loses Rasavi or Xeneth, either the one will fade or Adrian will die. 3. Part three explains what happens if you have two inside you. Once again, I’ll use Rasavi and Xeneth as an example. These two have completely different minds. They act according to their own wills. I’ll leave the rest I have planned for this into the story, where it’s the most important.
Theres more topics as well, but I think that they can be explained in the story. If they can’t, I’ll post another post like this one. So…how are you liking this story so far?
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Oct 16, 2008 1:20:18 GMT -5
Post by souseiki on Oct 16, 2008 1:20:18 GMT -5
Chapter 5 – Rastevash
Lyte stood a few feet away from the entrance to the harbor. He continued straight through a path hidden a little left from the blindingly white portal that led to the ships. Lyte, after a little struggle to get through the many bushes, trees, and other enchanted beings, opened his eyes upon a lush, quiet clearing. There wasn’t a sound except for the continuous smooth sound of the brook that ran through the left side. This place…still here after a few years too. I remember the day that my sister and I found this place…perhaps I can finally try ‘it’ here. Lyte brought out a small sphere, similar to a marble, out of his pocket. He then took off his Xeraphim while carefully balancing the sphere on his palm. He brought the sphere and Xeraphim together and for a moment, everything went completely silent. Suddenly, the clearing flashed white for a split second. The next moment a tall adult stood a few feet away from where the Xeraphim, sphere, and Lyte once stood.
The adult was almost like a normal person, except for the radiation of a god that emanated from his god-like aura. He had a white shirt on, contrary to the black jeans that he also wore. He sighed at Lyte and, after studying him, spoke. “You’ve changed after the last few years, Lyte. This is your last wish. Why have you come to my haven, deep in the forest of Ellinia, that Grendel himself made to keep me away from the world? Last you wished for your Xeraphim…what do you need me of here now?” Lyte blinked a few times, then after a long pause, stood. “It has indeed been a long time, Father. I wish for the power to save my sister, Lyza.” “Very well…This is the last time you see me, unless, of course, I summon you here. Anyhow, that can be granted.” Lyte’s father extended a hand for Lyte to take, and when they clasped hands, there was a small bolt of pure lightning that ran from Lyte’s father to him. Lyte stumbled a bit, and then fell to the ground. From the corner of his eye, he saw a white entity on his palm. Lyte slowly got to a sitting position and examined the entity. It was a roundish white thing, and as he could see, there was an eagle in the center, as if it was actually alive. (it moved and stuff) Lyte. I am your Kanmaru, or spirit, as you may say. The being transmitted all the information of a Kanmaru into Lyte in a second. My name is Rastevash, the highest rank of speed/wind. Last I was summoned was centuries ago…But for this time, I will show you the properties of my Being.The thing shifted until it formed into a whitish form of a sword. I shift myself into whatever that is best suited for the situation. The form of the sword solidified. It was gray, much like Adrian’s Kanmaru, with deep gold forms of words on the sword’s back and front. Of course, you move even faster than you once did with your Xeraphim. Most of the forms will be different, but all shalt have the words. Satisfied? Lyte ran across the clearing as he would have without spending his aura into his old Xeraphim from before. He disappeared at some times and reappeared at other places, all in all, in ¾ s of a second, he had already ran 2x around the clearing and arrived at the same spot as did before. Without another word, the sword faded into the white form again. I will come again if needed. The form turned liquidy and went through his hand, into him. By then Lyte’s Father had disappeared. Lyte mouthed a ‘Thank You’ and once again entered into the civil city of Ellinia, now in ruins and burning. Every house and tree were lit with flame, and from the time of the change that happened when he was with Rastevash, everything was the complete opposite of what it was before Lyte was gone.
there. just to avoid confusion, this didn't happen because of Lyte or Rastevash. how'd ya like it? ^^...i'm like, the only person whos even doing stories..anyways, this won't come in 2 weeks anymore. I'm jsut gonna do it whenever i'm bored..or when i feel like eet =D
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Oct 20, 2008 17:27:03 GMT -5
Post by wsxedcr08 on Oct 20, 2008 17:27:03 GMT -5
Omg amazing as usual. I love what you did with Lyte. this almost makes me want to go back to writing myself. ALMOST.
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Oct 26, 2008 2:29:10 GMT -5
Post by souseiki on Oct 26, 2008 2:29:10 GMT -5
Chapter 6 – Reborn
Narrator: The outcome at the end…it’s so obvious, yet some try to continue down the path…Is it not true that it all disappears when ‘it’ actually happens? Why fight? Why hide? Ask yourself. Is it really worth it all, the pain, the fact that others burn before you as you go along.. When you think about it…its not. Heh…Sometimes, something might change…
About 2 years after the capture of Lyza and awakenings of Adrian and Lyte.
Lyza shot the target dummy in front of her straight in the center, piercing its wood, the arrow continuing after it shot through the dummy. She strode over to her arrow and after a brief struggle, succeeded in taking it out of the wall. Lyza turned it over and read the letters that were inscribed on the back. Lyte & Joshua. She struggled to remember these two people, but, yet again, failed. ‘I wonder who these people are…My past is so..foggy now.’ She sighed. ‘Maybe Sir Ryan (Captain. Had to give him a name for Lyza =P)…He sure was nice to me since I came here. He even trained me and ‘helped’ me try to remember my memories too. I just wish he would tell me where he always is…’ “You know, pondering on your memories isn’t always a good thing, especially when you’re supposed to be practicing…” Lyza gasped and quickly turned around. A man a little older than the age of her stood leaning on a nearby tree. He wore a vintage hooded shirt and vintage black jeans. He smiled at her from his tree and walked over. “John, just because you’re in charge of me doesn’t mean that you can do creep up on me.” (John: The right-hand man of Captain. Every girl in the organization loves him =P He is nice, handsome, and in charge of Lyza for the moment.) A messenger raced into the courtyard, panting, and ran up to John. “Captain wants you to go to his office. Now. Also, you have to bring Lyza with you. Theres another code black emergency.” With that, he bowed deeply to both, and again darted out of the yard. “Code black? Wow. That means that they’re close to catching the other two hybrids. We’d better hurry, John.” He nodded in agreement and they both teleported into the chambers of Captain. Captain sat at his desk, reading the parchment that he recently received. Captain, this is a code black emergency! We’re on the trail of the other two hybrids, Adrian, and Lyte! Please send help! With their…specialties, we can’t possibly defeat them! Only either You, or Lyza and John can do that! Please! Captain finally put the letter down on his desk when a bright blue flash lit the room and Lyza and John arrived. Captain wordlessly handed the parchment to them. “This is code black. You two have tried against one of them, and failed. This time, you shall use ‘it’. Find them, and bring them back to me.” The parchment lit on fire and crumbled into dust. “Yes, Sir!” replied both. They once again disappeared. Captain then receded back in his chair. That memory spell that I cast on Lyza should be completed. If all goes well, she won’t remember a thing. Even if she does, John will be there, he always is. An hour later, Lyza and John reached the camp that sent the letter. They went to the squad leader, ignoring the others when they were bowed to. “Squad Leader Speed, you sent the parchment to Captain saying you found the two hybrids’ trail. Show us.” (John speaking) Speed bowed and then led them through a maze of trees, in the end they reached an open clearing where there was an obvious mark of battle. “The pair fought our group of hunters yesterday morning. They won unscathed, as always, and left this piece of ice with a black insignia.” He led them again through the forest and in a few minutes, stopped. “We tracked them until here. Afterwards, they just disappeared from our view. Very strange.” John kneeled on the ground and inspected a slightly glazed piece of grass. “Good enough. We’ll find them.” Speed saluted to them and left. “Heh. Amateurs. Come on, they obviously want us to find them. Well, might as well. We have to fight them anyways. Lets go in.” “Fine. I hope they’re not stupid enough to leave traps for us.” Lyza replied. John trotted through a clump of bushes with Lyza close behind.
Adrian stopped in a very large open clearing. “This should be big enough. Lyte, if you really want your sister back, you could find the place yourself you know…” Lyte stopped a few inches away. “I know, but you have a knack for this. Don’t wanna waste it” Lyte trotted closer to Adrian. “Remember the plan. You can’t fail this part, understand? I trust that you can take them both. Should be easy for you, since you haven’t even used your full Kanmaru in any of their fights yet. Are you planning to release..?” Adrian made a face at Lyte and reached behind his back, where his dragon’s tail was kept. “Of course! This is their only chance of getting either you or me, and they haven’t used theirs yet either. I wonder how Ryan figured how to get the Kanmaru out. I thought the second way was a well kept secret in my family.. Anyways, You’d better come in too. The most I can give you 15 minutes before I release it full. Hurry up and do yours as well. Their reasonably tough for half-bred hybrids.” Lyte emitted a chuckle. “Yeah.” He raced out and called over his shoulder. “Be careful!” Adrian sighed and turned around, whipping his dragon’s tail right in front of him and smirked. “heh… Aren’t you the fast one? Too bad.” The dragon’s tail shimmered white and a second later, John was half a clearing away from Adrian. Adrian, in turn, held two dualblades, Rasavi and Xeneth. The blades still shimmered an insane white. “Well, you have the guts to face us yourself, huh? Wheres your partner?” Lyza said a few feet away. Lyza’s bow turned black and a curved black bow appeared in her hands. The bow also had an etching in it that read Siphon. “Very good! I’m sure you could beat us separately, but how to you fair together?” John’s claw also turned red and transformed into a long, sharp arm-claw that went up to his shoulder. His etching was Alce. Adrian sighed again. Xeneth glowed a very bright gold and transformed even further. It grew longer, and was only bright gold, with many more variations. The air around it pulsed and shimmered in heat while emitting a semi-godly aura. Adrian’s arm also showed signs of gold. “Lets see…Normal is 1%. I’m pretty sure that 10% should be enough.” Lyza and John watched the transformation wonder. Telepathy was one of their skills. Can we take him? Just look at that! John…/ We can. Is yours at lvl 1 full? / yes./ Lets see how we fair before we change to lvl 2. Adrian smirked, placing Xeneth in front of him, for something that even Captain couldn’t evade…
how ya like it? i made it longer ^^ the telepathy part switches. first its Lyza, then John, then Lyza etc. weeee =DDD
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Oct 26, 2008 20:59:34 GMT -5
Post by wsxedcr08 on Oct 26, 2008 20:59:34 GMT -5
A man a little older than the age of her stood leaning on a nearby tree.
lol what a comically awkward sentence. xP
other than that, great chapter as usual. i love ur use of suspense and plot, well, obviously since i keep coming back. keep up the good work. if you're ever looking for an editor/someone to bounce ideas off of feel free to email/im me
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